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                             EXCERPT FROM CODENAME BLUE NOISE

                             ©2008-2009 QUANTA PERENNIAL LLC

                                   ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.

                                     By J.P. Martell



               INT.  KITCHEN BREAKFAST NOOK.  NIGHT
               At the counter, PUTTY MAN drops 2 shotglasses and fills them
               each with bourbon.  He pushes one to JARON.

                                   JARON
                         Y'know, putty man, you look like a
                         "Bud," to me.  Can I call you Bud?

               Putty Man shrugs a bit, "sure."  J holds up a glass in a
               salute.

                                   JARON
                         To barechested vixens, ever
                         elusive.

               Putty Makes a non-committal gesture and downs his glass. 
               Jaron shoots and squints out a bitter face.

                                   JARON
                         Ho.  Hoooo.  What, you don't
                         approve?  Heh.  Can't be gay, you
                         shoot bourbon like a cowboy.
                         Kiddin'.

               Putty Man gestures to his crotch, a neuter zone.

                                   JARON
                         Oh!  No genitalia.  That's rough. 
                         You need that drive, man.  Here.

               Jaron moves around the counter to rip a chunk of putty off
               his malleable friend, rolls it into a nice tubesnake, and
               jams it onto Putty's crotch.  Putty uses his gloves to mold
               his own face into a wry smile and pours another round.

               Reseating himself:

                                   JARON
                         Few more of these and I'll mold you
                         a nice pair of knockers.

               They cheers, shoot.  Jaron turns.  From over his shoulder,
               the REDEYE MECHANISM retreats upstairs with a whirring series
               of clicks.

                                   JARON
                         Jesus fuck.  I don't know what's
                         going on upstairs but-

               Putty jiggles the bottle for another round.

                                   JARON
                         No, you go ahead.  Did you see that
                         fucking thing?  What is that? 
                         Second thought, yeah I'll have
                         another.

               From upstairs a series of noises:  Footstep thumps.  A brief
               clatter.  A door closes.

                                   JARON
                             (whisper)
                         Oh fuck.  Oh fuck me.  Alright, I'm
                         going up there.  You hear that?

               Putty very slowly nods.  

                                   JARON
                         Ok, dammit.

               He shoots his bourbon. 

                                   JARON
                         Can you keep an eye on our winged
                         friend in there?  

               J nods towards the Girl's Bedroom, indicating its occupant. 
               Putty nods and shoots his bourbon.  Jaron reluctantly rises
               and fist-pounds Putty Man.

                                   JARON
                         See you in ten, Bud.

               J crosses the Living Room and hits a few more lights on the
               way.  He pauses at the bottom stair.  A wall of black gears
               recedes into the upstairs proper.

                                   JARON
                         Here goes-

               Glancing back Jaron catches a brief glimpse of Putty's arms
               stuck to the wall outside the girl's bedroom.  Stretching
               thinner pulled by insectile claws, the door slams with a
               distinct FLUTTER.  

                                   JARON
                         Fuck, Putty-

               He hesitates.  Shaking his head, J commits to the stairs.

                                   JARON
                         Hang in there, putty man.



               INT.  UPSTAIRS WRECK ROOM.  NIGHT

               Quiet.  Deep night seeps through the skylights.  The bedroom
               door is closed.  JARON creeps toward it and stops.  Wonders.

               On a whim he crosses to the racks of DVD CASES.  He opens a
               few and replaces them.  All empty.  He picks up the top case,
               a copy of AMERICAN CAKE: CHEERLEADER FRACAS.  The DVD is in
               case.

                                   JARON
                         POOR BOUNTY FOR THIEVES.

               He crosses past the futon to the bedroom.  THROWS the door
               open to-



               INT.  UPSTAIRS BEDROOM.  NIGHT

               The bathroom door is ajar.

                                   JARON
                         Hello?

               The window is shut, the closet door as well.  Jaron sticks
               his head into the bathroom.  Nothing.  He moves to the
               closet.



               INT.  UPSTAIRS CLOSET.  NIGHT

               JARON opens the closet door and flicks the overhead switch. 
               Pillows tumble over him from the poorly organized shelves.

                                   JARON
                         GETTOF-

               He bats a few of them away.  

                                   JARON
                         Aw Jesus.

               He moves to leave but as he shuts the door, he notices
               something.  A door he missed earlier from the entrance door's
               occlusion.  He undoes the small latch and heads into-



               INT.  UPSTAIRS ATTIC SPACE CLOSET.  NIGHT

               A plywood-floored attic space.  It looks somewhat unfinished. 
               Insulation faces open air.  A few boxes marked TAXES are
               stacked in the corner in front of another, smaller door.

                                   JARON
                         What.



               INT.  UPSTAIRS ATTIC CRAWLSPACE.  NIGHT

               Jaron crawls through the door into the attic proper.  A
               silhouette of mechanical being ducks into darkness and REDEYE
               clicks away with it.  

                                   JARON
                         STOP!

               He rushes forward and panics as a something dangling from the
               ceiling hits his face.  Flailing wildly, Jaron knocks the
               thing and it clicks.  The drawstring ignites a dim tungsten
               bulb.

               He chases after the shadowy mecha but it's nowhere to be
               found.  

                                   JARON
                         Woah.

               In its stead a hefty collection of boxes.  A coat-rack.  An
               Atari 2600?

                                   JARON
                         Mint condition.

               He looks around.  The overhead light flickers.  

                                   JARON
                         Alright then.  I'm leaving you to
                         your business.  Leave me be
                         downstairs and we'll have...

               The light flickers out momentarily and returns.

                                   JARON
                         We'll have a mutual understanding.

               Hastily Jaron tugs the cord and dashes out of the attic,
               leaving the glowing red eye in its hiding place behind a
               distant strut.



               INT.  LIVING ROOM.  NIGHT

               The hardwood floor swells and jeers like a calm ocean.  JARON
               leaves the ATARI box by the TV and calls out.

                                   JARON
                         BUD?

               A weighty ruckus sounds from the girl's bedroom.  A CRASH
               against the nearest wall precludes a SLAM against the girl's
               bedroom door.  J makes it halfway to the kitchen before the
               power goes out.

               Jaron freezes in blackness.  The ruckus continues in the
               other room as his eyes adjust.  Outside, something triggers
               the motion sensor floodlight above the garage.  Jaron turns
               to notice a red glow from behind- the REDEYE retreats back
               upstairs.

                                   JARON
                         GODDAMMIT, You-

               Jaron picks up a lamp and considers throwing it at the empty
               space that Redeye occupied moments before.  More CRASHES from
               the bedroom.

                                   JARON
                         Will everyone please CHILL THE FUCK
                         OUT?

               KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK.  Front door.

               Complete silence.

               Jaron freezes in place.

               KNOCK KNOCK.  KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK.

               Jaron places the lamp back on the table.  He creeps toward
               the front door and opens it to find:



               EXT.  FRONT DOOR STOOP.  NIGHT

               DETECTIVE CUTCH and two FACELESS COPS are perched
               professionally on the stoop.  Behind them the same Lincoln
               town car and squad car from before idle in the driveway.  

                                   CUTCH
                         Quite a ruckus.

                                   JARON
                         Evening, officers,  detective. 
                         Yeah, the power. 
                         It's been kind of crazy around
                         here.  What seems to be the
                         trouble? Er, again?

                                   CUTCH
                         Seems a lone residence this far out
                         on such a new part of the grid is
                         prone to rolling blackouts. 
                         Thought we'd check in and see if
                         you needed anything.  

               A CLOWN decked out in full costume mopes gloomily in the back
               of the squad car.

                                   JARON
                         Good timing. I wasn't in the dark
                         for under-

               J checks his watch, which is an indecipherable spinning
               puddle of liquid orbs.  His dilated pupils struggle with this
               particular detail.

                                   JARON
                         Uh.  Two minutes?

                                   CUTCH
                         How about we come in and take a
                         look?  Probably just the fuse box. 
                         Murray can help out with that,
                         can't you Murray?

               A faceless uniform nods and murmurs something indecipherable
               from a behind a blurry mask.

                                   MURRAY
                         MMhMM.

                                   CUTCH
                         We can help you out.

               Behind the law the clown gestures animatedly about picking
               his handcuffs as he reaches into the front of the squad car.

                                   JARON
                         That's a...  That's a real clown
                         you guys have there.  Someone
                         should keep an eye on him.

               The cops all turn to regard the evil clown, who waves.  Both
               his cuffs are still on, seemingly.

                                   CUTCH
                         Modern world's full of clowns like
                         that.  You aren't a clown, are you? 
                         We don't like it when people blow
                         hot air into our collective
                         balloon.  I'm not too easily
                         twisted into little fun shapes
                         either.  Try to twist my form and I
                         pop, you follow?  Nobody here wants
                         that.

               The faceless blobs beside the detective nod synchronously. 
               Tick, tock, tick, tock.

                                   JARON
                         Listen, I appreciate it.  Things
                         around here seem a little...

               The clown, free of the confines of the automobile, now
               unicycles in circles on the driveway. It smiles an uneven,
               sharp-toothed grin as it juggles what appears to be infant
               skulls.  Its eyes are black and glistening.  They look dead.

                                   JARON
                         Sssssstrange.  Are you sure that
                         prisoner is secured?

                                   CUTCH
                         Don't worry, my partner's got
                         things nice and tight.

               A feminine silhouette in the detective's Lincoln buffs a pump
               action shotgun.  The clown, miraculously back in the squad
               car, mimes crying with curing "boo-hoo" fists.

                                   JARON
                         Well, I did see a white pickup out
                         back.  Behind the lake.  Pond?  The
                         road behind the lake behind the
                         farm.  I don't know if it was from
                         the farm or if it just came from
                         out past the farm, I don't know
                         what the road over there looks
                         like.  

               Cutch stares, prompting J to go on nervously.

                                   JARON
                         Because I haven't seen it.  Anyway,
                         I saw the truck out back and then
                         about 15 minutes later it came by
                         here, past the house.  I don't know
                         what that's about but it made a
                         loop as if it were interested.  As
                         in the driver.  The driver might be
                         interested in what's going on.

                                   CUTCH
                         And what's that?

                                   JARON
                         What?

                                   CUTCH
                         What's going on?

                                   JARON
                         I'm house-sitting.  For a family.

                                   CUTCH
                         Right, the family.  You know
                         anything else about the family
                         other than the name?

                                   JARON
                         Yeah, the boys like to ski.  

                                   CUTCH
                         Is that so?

                                   JARON
                         Family photos.  Anyways.

                                   CUTCH
                         If you see that truck again try to
                         get the number of the plates.  Call
                         me and we'll run it.  Could be your
                         little funhouse has one too many
                         visitors.  Or maybe it's just the
                         mirrors.  In the meantime, you
                         should probably...  

               Jaron stares at Cutch, processing hard but unable to come up
               with what happens next.

                                   CUTCH
                         Get the power back on?

                                   JARON
                         Right. Thanks.  Hey, do you have
                         like a card or something?  You
                         know, just in case.

                                   CUTCH
                         Sure.  Just in case.

               He hands Jaron a business card.  Jaron pretends to read it
               but the letters dance while the logo runs off the card to
               fall to the ground.

               J points at the clown convict.

                                   JARON
                         I don't know what that did, but
                         it's guilty.

                                   CUTCH
                         That's our job to find out.

                                   JARON
                         Good night, sir.  Sirs.  And lady.

                                   CUTCH
                         Rest well.

                                   JARON
                         Sure thing.



               INT.  LIVING ROOM.  NIGHT

               JARON collapses against the door as he shuts it.  He locks
               the bolt and slides the chain across.  Turning, he bumps head
               first into PUTTY MAN.  

                                   JARON
                         Bud.

               Jaron offers a soft nudge to the shoulder.

               Putty Man is covered in gapes and gouges.  With a stretch and
               a POP! Jaron pulls off Putty's comically large dong and
               starts molding it.  He finishes a serviceable-looking pistol
               and hands it to Putty.

                                   JARON
                         If you see an evil clown, shoot it.

               The putty-gun barrel droops flaccidly.

               Putty man points animatedly.

                                   JARON
                         Right, right.  How's our friend?

               Putty mimes something.  Makes gate with his gloved fingers,
               motions through them with fluttery hands.

                                   JARON
                         Ok, what's?  He flew...

               Putty gives thumbs up.  Mimes gate furiously.

                                   JARON
                         He flew through...  He got out?

               Putty gives thumbs up and then hunches in defeat.

                                   JARON
                         Man!  Come on, Bud it was really
                         hard to get him in there!

               FLUTTERS and FLAPS spread from behind the kitchen.  

                                   JARON
                         Well, this won't do.

               Jaron creeps into the far end of the kitchen and picks up the
               BASEBALL BAT.  Darkness, and FLAPPING close to the ceiling. 
               Jaron squints and creeps out of the kitchen.



               EXT.  BACK PORCH- SCREENED IN.  NIGHT

               Carefully, JARON inches his way out into the night.  A PUTTY
               HAND reaches out and grabs his arm from the living room.

               Jaron stops.  He looks inside from the deep din of the
               covered porch.



               INT.  LIVING ROOM.  NIGHT

               PUTTY MAN shakes his head.  "Don't go."



               EXT.  BACK PORCH- SCREENED IN.  NIGHT

               JARON, wide eyed, pulls back from the grip.  The putty arm
               stretches to a thin droopy cable.  The grip releases.  Jaron
               pulls the putty hand from his arm and pushes the segment back
               onto-



               INT. LIVING ROOM.  NIGHT

               PUTTY's chest.  The placement is dead center.  Awkwardly, the
               fingers on the hand wiggle.  Putty molds a dejected look to-



               EXT.  BACK PORCH- SCREENED IN.  NIGHT

               JARON.  He shivers.  

                                   JARON
                         Please don't touch me again.  I'll
                         be right back.

               Through the glass pattern of the door, PUTTY stands firmly,
               looking all too real. 
               Jaron slides the door shut with a CLICK.  A wall of
               CRICKETSOUND permeates the night.  KATYDIDS.  What could only
               be the mockingbird offers the sound of a seagull.  

                                   JARON
                         Seagullsmy ass.

               Jaron slides open the screen door and creeps from under the
               screened-in-porch into the dense moonlight.  



               EXT.  BACK PORCH- OPEN.  NIGHT

               Silver light spills over everything.  The grain of night
               gives way to the moonlight ever so slightly and things become
               more crisp.  JARON looks straight up and almost falls over.

                                   JARON
                         Ahhh...

               The sky is a gorgeous palette of stars and nebulae.  The
               milky way isn't a dim belt but a bright swath.  A few stray
               low-altitude clouds dot the view.  He leans the BAT against
               the house.

                                   JARON
                         Ahhhhhhholy shit.

               Almost involuntarily, and without moving his gaze from the
               awesome astronomy, his hands find a smoke and a light.  

               He reaches up to the sky and smiles, exhaling a plume of
               smoke.  He frowns at a cloud blocking some of the view.  His
               hands drop to his sides.

               The clouds are moving visibly.  Jaron stares at the cloud
               intensely.  His muscles relax.  The cigarette drops from his
               hand and he doesn't seem to notice. A small breeze picks up. 
               The offending cloud stops in its tracks.

               Fellow clouds in the weather front continue to move.  The
               cloud holds still and begins to drift into the distance as if
               picked off by a rogue airstream.  It breaks into a few pieces
               and Jaron smiles.  

               He goes for his smoke and realizes he's not holding anything. 
               Jaron desperately snatches the cigarette and blows it clean
               of ash.  It leaves behind a burn-mark on the deck.  He "tsks"
               himself and shuffles his foot over it.  

               Confused, he spins around looking for the thing- ah, BAT, He
               snatches the bat and gracefully descends the porch steps into
               the-



               EXT.  BACK YARD.  NIGHT

               Blackness of the back yard.  It engulfs him with the grain of
               lowlight.  Colors desaturate.  Suddenly the sound of insects
               returns mightily.  He clutches the bat and approaches the
               basement latch door with the speed of someone who simply
               wants to get something over with.

               He CLACKS the latch and throws the door open, which triggers
               the back floodlight.  

                                   JARON
                         Huh.  Batteries.  Handy.  

               He taps his head with the bat and climbs down into-



               INT.  BASEMENT.  NIGHT

               The basement is dim with the outside floodlight spilling in. 
               JARON steps down with his other foot and crosses into a
               spiderweb, which gets caught in his mouth.

               He spits, waves the bat around and spins, but the majority of
               the web catches on the end.  Between the bat and his face, a
               good-sized Black and Yellow Argiope crawls directly towards
               his mouth.

               Jaron spits and waves the bat so frantically he loses track
               of the spider.  He looks around.  The web is gone.  He
               searches the ground.  He searches his shoes and pants.  He
               looks and-  

               The bat! Onto his hand!  He throws the bat into the basement
               with a CLUNK.  The CAMEL CRICKETS rouse.  With a disturbing
               volume the crickets SCREAM.  A few jump in his vicinity and
               Jaron startles with fright.  

               Outside the auto-floodlight turns off.  Jaron sits in
               blackness.  



               EXT. BACK YARD.  NIGHT

               He scrambles outside and flails about.  Slowly his breathing
               normalizes and he calms himself.  Aiming towards the
               floodlight he waves and gestures.

                                   JARON
                         YOU

               Flails.

                                   JARON
                         MOTHER

               Waves.

                                   JARON
                         FUCKING

               Flails.

                                   JARON
                         COCK

               Waves.

                                   JARON
                         SUCKING

               Jumps and waves.  The light doesn't come on.  

                                   JARON
                         Piece of shit.  Guess I could just
                         sneak in here and steal whatever
                         the fuck-

               He closes the door and the light flicks on.  He opens the
               door again.  Deep breath.  



               INT.  BASEMENT.  NIGHT

               JARON sticks his head in and waits for his eyes to adjust. 
               Through the grain and dim, he sees the breaker box.  

               He makes a controlled dash over the concrete toward the box
               and pulls it open.  Dark bodies of CAMEL CRICKETS whiz by,
               some strike him.  He tries not to wince but can't help
               brushing himself off compusively.



               EXT.  BACK YARD.  NIGHT

               A breeze passes through the yard and swings the door shut,
               along with the latch.  



               INT.  BASEMENT.  NIGHT

               Complete blackness.  SCREAMING CAMEL CRICKETS. Jaron's
               fingers crawl over the door to the breaker box, forming a
               distinct contour of light where his fingers gather
               information.  And leave fingerprints.
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